Clarity is key. Too much text can crowd the page and overwhelm the user.
No: | Yes: |
Do not write: "Make sure you use your Aleph login to log in to Aleph at the beginning of your shift." |
Write: "Log in to Aleph at the beginning of your desk shift." |
No: | Yes: |
Don't write:
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Write: "Click X" |
No: | Yes: |
Do not use terms like "Staff Barton" |
Use "Aleph" instead "Staff Barton." Refer to the terminology list for when to use "login" vs. "log in" and other common terms. |
Define acronyms and abbreviations (in parentheses) following their initial use on a page.
No: | Yes: |
Do not create new acronyms. |
Use known acronyms. |
Do not use "eg.", "eg", "etc", "ie." or "ie" |
Use "e.g." ,"etc.", "i.e." |